Push and Pull - Comments

I haven't read very many of your poems, but after reading so many I feel like this is where your description really thrives! The way you describe the love interest is gorgeous, they sound like someone that you should not lust after (and that the narrator doesn't always have lovesick thoughts about them). A relatable notion, and the last line packs the most punch: the narrator is attached to the other person so much so it is like killing themselves. Truly, tragically, beautiful.