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WingDing Gaster (100)

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Those last two lines...absolutely jarring. They're a definite contrast from the tone of the rest of the piece. All I can say is wow.

September 15th, 2016 at 03:13pm
Ethan :D (100)

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That's a very powerful ending I like it.

September 15th, 2016 at 08:10am

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