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  • WingDing Gaster

    WingDing Gaster (100)

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    Those last two lines...absolutely jarring. They're a definite contrast from the tone of the rest of the piece. All I can say is wow.
    September 15th, 2016 at 03:13pm
  • Ethan :D

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    That's a very powerful ending I like it.
    September 15th, 2016 at 08:10am
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