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  • ThatOneManDude

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    Thank you!!
    December 11th, 2016 at 02:23pm
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    I like the rhyme scheme you have going. I think this probably sounds great to music. :) really nicely done. It would certainly be a fun listen. The message was powerful and I think your word choice was excellent. :) *thumbs up*
    December 11th, 2016 at 02:06pm
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