It's Not You, It's Me - Comments

@ Luis D.
That's the beauty about writing, you get so engulfed in it and what you think is "okay" will end up making someone sit there with their eyebrows arched, or leave an impression. Either way, don't stop.

That really means a lot thank you. I didn't realize how many unique one-liners I had in there. I fixed some errors. But thank you again for your words.

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I desire to share my stories; a past as hectic as the creation of the moon.

This, this whole line has me completely shook -- as the popular saying goes. It makes sense and is just so...perfect.

Okay, where do I start? This whole poem...I mean it's beautiful. From what I'm reading you've done so much and survived a lot. You're a very strong individual and I cannot get over this. I loved this! Keep writing, definitely keep writing.