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  • cruciatus.

    cruciatus. (455)

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    I honestly really love your word choice in this piece. The poem has a very quiet feel to it and almost feels like a self-kept secret. I feel like the girl whom this poem is about is a very strong person and it’s not easy to make a character come to lifelike that in a poem. All in all, I'm really glad that I read this. It's subtle, a little bit sad but very well-written.
    September 12th, 2017 at 07:54pm