Autumn Is Here! - Comments

Anetty.j etty (100)

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Autumn rocks

December 13th, 2017 at 06:55am

Michael Westen (450)

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October 6th, 2017 at 02:47am

Michael Westen (450)

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This is really cute. The first stanza is definitely my favorite part. Using the word zigzag instead of a different verb was great. I also have to commend you on being able to rhyme without sounding ridiculous - something that I personally find hard to do.

This whole poem really compliments the new season, good job Erin!

October 6th, 2017 at 02:45am

amandarenee08 (100)

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I really love this! <3

September 26th, 2017 at 06:51pm

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this definitely makes me want to bring out my winter gear or at least warmer clothes. XD But sadly my mind is still in summer mode. But I loved this poem. It puts me in the mood for fall.

September 11th, 2017 at 06:27pm