Dirt - Comments

@ cruciatus.
Thank you! I am not online very frequently so I just saw your comment now. I appreciate it and I am glad you enjoyed it! :)

I absolutely love this piece and feel that it's very relatable to me as a reader. I love the sense of nostalgia that it had to it, especially in part two. It reminded me of my own childhood which, while it was decent, was similar in circumstance to the narrator's as being a bit worse than we like to remember it as being. I got a very real sense of being in the places described by the narrator, and found myself actually feeling a cool, brisk rush of autumn air on my shoulders as I read. Excellent job!