I Tried - Comments

This poem is very well written. Excellent flow, and it just has such raw emotions. No further work needed on it, it's perfect actually.

This reminds me of a friendship I lost earlier last year. I don't think it needs work. It's raw and emotional and I love that you can interpret it in various ways. I absolutely loved this, plus, I've been thinking about this lost friendship a lot these last few days, it's as if I needed to read this.

This is very raw and very intense, and as with most (ahem, actually...all) of your work, I was completely enthralled in the emotion of what you were saying. Heartbreak is rough and especially when you're the one who gives all, and I think you portrayed that excellently. I love it!