My Funny Little Thing - Comments

@ texasgrampy
Excuse me but I do not appreciate you only reading my poem, something that brings me joy to write, only to critique it. Find another hobby please.

"id" is not a word. All personal pronouns are capitalized (I, not i), and there needs to be an apostrophe after the I to show that there are missing letters in this contraction, e.g., the "h" and the "a" in the word "had" are replaced with an apostrophe to connect the two adjoining words, "I had".