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  • akmaoptea

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    yeah I think I agree with Linda... I like it, but you could expand upon the idea and make an even better poem if you wanted to
    April 6th, 2007 at 02:52pm
  • Dilt

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    thanks!
    April 5th, 2007 at 10:05pm
  • Legomannj

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    You know what could be really awesome Dilt?
    If you write more you could have more verses ending with [i]I'm fading away[/i]

    My point of view again=)
    April 5th, 2007 at 09:51pm
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