tides of change - Comments

yeah, the orignal concept was a haiku about once finding comfort in a place that you loved, but now has changed. But it ended up sounding alot like a suicide poem of drowning. I guess you can take it either way.

Once again, I'm going to be redundant and just go ahead and say I really like it and that I feel like I can relate to it. Even if it's intended in a different way than I read it or something, I feel like I can relate to it. Oh yeah, and it's really well written.

its cool
it reminds me of like outdoors and wanting to fly free.