First things first, the layout compliments the poem beautifully. It's short, sweet and very tropical. It reminds me of Moana which I suppose is on brand given your theme at the moment.
However, personally, the rhyme between the middle and last line seems out of place and disrupted my reading; it seems more like a single line and a rhyming couplet than a haiku (this isn't to say that haikus can't rhyme though).
Regardless, I enjoyed reading it; the ocean "waving" and the subject singing "hello" is very cute.
However, personally, the rhyme between the middle and last line seems out of place and disrupted my reading; it seems more like a single line and a rhyming couplet than a haiku (this isn't to say that haikus can't rhyme though).
Regardless, I enjoyed reading it; the ocean "waving" and the subject singing "hello" is very cute.