Träume - Comments

I was so happy to see you submit a German poem (and so glad that I could understand it without the use of a translation!).
It's a beautiful haiku and I don't have much else to say, really. A sweet, innocent poem that's very enjoyable really!

@ PoeticMess.
I'm trying to use poetry to practice my grammar, haha! I think it should actually, I didn't even think of that. Mein grammatik ist katastroph Thank you!

This is really cute poem! I was excited to see something in German! It's exciting when I get an authentic chance to practice the language! One thing, but if you're talking about multiple birds, shouldn't it be "fliegen" (for "they"/plural) rather than "fliege" (for I)? That just popped into my head, but my German is rusty! Anyway, cute poem.