In Two I'll Tear - Comments

Chilling. So chilling. I like this alot. U R GOOD!

Thank you Dreya=)

ok I've told Dilt this a zillion times, but I'm a sucker for reptition
and I love the way you use it in this
But I would suggest, especially since you are repeating almost exactly or exactly word for word on this
that you maybe italicize the second line that's the repitition in each verse
it helps draw the reader in & makes it more powerful
Other than that its perfect.

Tis awesome^^

That's soo...what word? what word? ... Strong..^^
I like it