Eden - Comments

Wow, that was fantastic! It had lovely vocabulary and emotion, it really spoke to me. The meaning was very intense and it was a very even poem; very consistent. It had an excellent flow and rhythm to it. The details and description you included were well placed and everything. Overall an extremely good job!

What a fantastic poem! It has a great meaning and it's very well written. It flows and is consistent. I wish you luck in the contest!

OHMYGOD GORGEOUS.
that was really epically beautiful, and i mean that. you have talent.

So, like...I have this weird obsession,
with Eden and the garden and all of
that shit, right?
So this poem hit really close to my
heart.
And there's so much emotion in it,
too, there's like all these feelings
that might be chaotic in something
else, another piece of work, but in
this, they all fit together just
perfectly. Your description and
vocabulary are all wonderful too;
you make everything so vivid
and...[i]real.[/i]
I loved this so much.
:]