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  • HelloI'mNaked

    HelloI'mNaked (100)

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    I love it!
    It's amazing, Chris!
    September 11th, 2008 at 01:03am
  • mannaquin

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    i love it. everyone has felt this way before, i think... hope you don't mind pointers though:
    if it's a song you need at least one chorus to repeat. it helps give dramatic effect and more flow to the song
    if it's a poem you need more punctuation. commas where you want people to pause. periods when a section is over...
    but other than that i loved it!
    September 7th, 2008 at 11:43pm
  • Taylor Lael

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    .........Wow. thats really good
    May 20th, 2008 at 07:05pm
  • porn

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    -swoons- You have succeeded in girlyfying meh. xD I love you.
    May 15th, 2008 at 09:32pm
  • DragKing_.gaylord

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    You pwn.
    May 15th, 2008 at 12:03am
  • CupCake;;

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    Omfg! AMAZING!!! I fucking love it. Im so jealous D: . it would be awesome if you did make this a song =O
    Anywhore. Fantastic job xP
    May 14th, 2008 at 11:31pm
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