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  • Oceansoul

    Oceansoul (100)

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    really cool, i liked how u incorporated all the major elements its makes the poem sound really epic and dramatic like the whole world is pushing the 'you' in the poem to the speaker. really good :)
    September 20th, 2009 at 01:27am
  • LetMeKnow

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    The biging did sorta sound like a spell. The 'water adn fire combine' part reminded me of that show Captian Planet. haha I like it though. Nice job!
    May 19th, 2008 at 05:53am
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