I Am Fine Without You - Comments

i knw exactly how u feel i just dont have the guts to tell him...

this is soo what im going through. my favorite. its amazingly true.

I like your poem. =] It's very dark like most of mine are. It also creates a very unique picture in my head (though, I don't know what others think, since my mind is very abstract). It'd make it even better if you used different words for some things. It'd make it sound better.