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  • Dreams.of.Someday

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    I don't really like the last stanza that much, either. Maybe I should get rid of it. It's quite crappy.
    May 23rd, 2008 at 01:06am
  • SaintEMber

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    i liked it a lot until the last stanza. the last stanza seemed like someone was wallowing in teenage angst. the first two stanzas were very good though.
    May 22nd, 2008 at 11:40pm
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