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  • Rust;

    Rust; (100)

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    It is very awsome.
    It's very cool because I can relate to it and when I can relate I feel better.
    When I read it, the speed of of worrying came through my brain. -no.sense-

    Anyway. It's madddd.
    June 7th, 2008 at 04:45pm
  • ciarmione.

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    I love it Aliana, I really like how you made some of them rhyme and some didn't (:
    I really adore poems written like that.

    And the length of it fits it well, oh and the fact that I could relate to it haha ;D
    awesome. <3
    June 7th, 2008 at 04:11pm
  • Erased

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    It's cute......

    But i think you should try writing this in a haiku format.....
    Trust me.... It would sound much more poetic....
    June 7th, 2008 at 04:10pm
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