Like others have said, the personification of this piece is the neatest draw to the poem. But that's what the contest that you wrote it for was ABOUT. So let's look at HOW you personified it. Everything that happened to and on the bed, it remembers. But it can't say anything. The breakup of the poem helped feel the poor bed's desperation. I also enjoy the fact that you aren't afraid to use some of the more mature things that happen in bed. Not just lullabys and sleep. But sex.
July 9th, 2008 at 08:44am
