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Talking-Pinata (100)

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The dancer. And the final dance. This one comes close to 850 miles. :)

July 9th, 2008 at 08:42am
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Very interesting.

June 13th, 2008 at 08:17pm
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i like it its interesting i just think the last line could of been a little tinsy wit better but its good

June 13th, 2008 at 03:25am

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