Sadly Awake - Comments

Woah, man, seriously. Like, how do you do it?

Just .. lovely.

It's c-l-o-w-n. Yeah it's a bit confuzzling.
Thank you both again for the comments! =]

i'm sorry, i think i'm blind, but what's the last word in the whole poem? is it "c-l-o-w-n" or is it "d-o-w-n"??

anyways, the poem reminds me of the times people have stabbed my back, the people i had considered friends--they turned out to all be fake...its exactly what happens to me when a "friend" crushes me like burning out a ciggeret on the ground with their giant foot.

Simply...
Wow...