Crimson Red - Comments

I love the imagry in this - it's so raw and very real but so beuatiful in it's own way
I think it would be better less run together
if you cut it into smaller sections but i understand that some poems need a flowing form to tie it all in so it's still good the way it is.

Wow. This one is pure amazment.
It sorta remind me of the song "The Crimson" by Atreyu.
The emotion in this is very strong.
I just think you should spell check and capitlize. :)
But overall this is a wonderful peice of work .

>,> Good enough to say amazing. XD Forgot to put that in my post.

I really have no criticism for this poem. It was really good. :)

you need no critcism! it was amazing. perfect.

whoa. i really like this a lot.

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow.
I don't know if I can critize your work.
It's too damn good!
I like this one alot. =]

Comment people please, I want you to criticize my work, so I can get better..