Snow - Comments

I like this poem! Someitmes I wish that the whole Earth was just covered with snow, covering all of the bad and dark and sins in the world. Things that people don't want to hear or know, things like jealousy and hate and war. You've got the right idea. Don't let reality chase your peace away or your purity. You can still be pure and good. It makes the rest of the world seem a little brighter, too.

I've noticed that you really like the world silently. Everyone has their words they really favour and go back to in their writing. You're a good writer. Question of interest: Is it really naiive to think the best of everyone/everything? Perhaps it is just optimism. I find that a little taste of optimism can go a long way.

wow....thats so true.

i love ur poems.

u should write more.

theyd be awesome.