Demise - Comments

Beautiful!

This poem is brutally beautiful. It's like when I used to tell my friend it was selfish when she tried to take herself away from me, but then I turned around and thought about it, and realized that I wouldn't think about her if I did it.

i wish laura would stop beating me to commenting on your poems.
i really like this one saz.
it is amazing in so many ways, i know exactly how to interpret this.
i get what it's saying. and who its about and she is a complete twat and i hate her almost, probably exactly as much as you do.
i hope i'm the one to see her fall. because she will. no doubt about it.
xoxoxoxooxoxox i love you xoxoxo

okayy this poem is truely amazing =0

seriously this poem is so honest and true and she's a bitch...
there is absolutly no reson for you to feel guilty like at all..
but yehh i really wanna hear this as a song.. =]