what's it gonna be? - Comments

Trigger (100)

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be cooler if it rhymed but i'm sure it would take out a lot of the flavor in it
but that's what makes a better author right?
lol i like it all the same (:

November 27th, 2008 at 08:59pm

sorriso;xo (100)

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I liked it a lot and I understood what you meant :)

June 25th, 2008 at 09:48pm

Pretty Reckless (100)

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its great =] and really true tbh
my fav part is the
"will you spit on me?
will you slap my face?
will you rip out my soul?"
its really good =] and really honest =]

June 24th, 2008 at 10:51pm

Friday Night (100)

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it's well goooooooood :)
the language is good tbh, but the structure could be improved

but i totally get it bubz

LOVE YOU XOXO

June 24th, 2008 at 10:34pm