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  • Rippiling.Mirror.

    Rippiling.Mirror. (100)

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    i know but i'm not normal... i change it a lot.
    July 8th, 2008 at 06:42pm
  • lfpuppylover

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    The only thing is to watch where it rhymes. The rhyming lines in the first part are diffferent than the rhyming lines in the second.
    July 2nd, 2008 at 10:35pm
  • lfpuppylover

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    I don't beleive it sucks at all!! It has feeling and portrays a message that everyone spreads, but so few understand.
    July 2nd, 2008 at 10:34pm
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    i know it sucks but can i have SOME type of feedback??? anything???
    July 2nd, 2008 at 01:06am
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