Wow this is so much AWESOME!!! UHG how come I can't write like THIS!...UHG I forgot I'm a virgin...boo me...but still I REALLY like this. You write what you know... :)
Deep, I could never bring myself to write so easily about something so well I do not talk about relationships and I do not want one. I have commitment issues and that my dear is one of my deepest fears.
Your poems do rock
This poem is great. Full off everything I love in a poem. Especially the fact it's a story poem. I don't know if you plan on writing anymore, but I would love to see what you could create next.
Damn you and your poetry sage
It rocks way too much =]
I love the line
'It's a good thing I don't remember, so I don't have to forget' !