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Love it is it extremely good!

Wow

nicola

Brilliant!!

this is wondeful.
i write poems like this sometimes,
although not as well as you.
=]

this is very good! i like the rhyme scheme and the flow of it.

mr George Bush should read this...i agree

If your british like me i say we should send this to Gordon Brown before he turns into another Tony Blair

very good poem btw

-jess

it's really really good! i totally agree with you, I'm going to be a Greenpeace activist when I'm older.

omg that is really good it gets a seriouse issue across very well wow such a great poem

[quote="Wolverine"][quote="Jinx_Luckystar"]Mary could we write a melody for this and make it a song? It would rock[/quote]

I think that actually makes sense. We need more anti-war statement songs in this world and yours is seriously amazing. Like G.D's September Ends (and yes I DO know the whole song title I just can't be bothered to type it), the video is a great one and makes a good statement. Keep writing. XOXO[/quote]Yep, we have a tune for it now!

[quote="Jinx_Luckystar"]Mary could we write a melody for this and make it a song? It would rock[/quote]

I think that actually makes sense. We need more anti-war statement songs in this world and yours is seriously amazing. Like G.D's September Ends (and yes I DO know the whole song title I just can't be bothered to type it), the video is a great one and makes a good statement. Keep writing. XOXO

Mary could we write a melody for this and make it a song? It would rock

[quote="Empress Of Moldolvia"]Our president should read this [[assuming you're american]]

But I love it, it's so true!

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Teehee im english, but thank you anyway =D

Our president should read this [[assuming you're american]]

But I love it, it's so true!

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wowwwiee Mary!!
soooo gudd =D
me luvv it
and Kirsty is ryte - it is very inspirational

I LOVE IT
so true
I agree

Wow, this is a great poem! :D

Wow Mary, thats really inspirational. This is a really serious issue.