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  • x.Death.Writer.x

    x.Death.Writer.x (100)

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    Once again. Awesome. I learn to ignore that there are no rhymes in some of the lines because I just get so lost in it.
    July 29th, 2008 at 09:15am
  • bemianmade_777

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    it's: is this a fright that i should fight,sorry i was wrong spelled.
    July 22nd, 2008 at 04:29pm
  • xxkimmi

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    loved it :]

    oh the line : Is his a fright that I should fight?
    did you mean: Is he a fright that i should fight?

    awesome poem by the way
    July 22nd, 2008 at 02:28am
  • hello; winter

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    The theme is amazing, and explains in amazing detail the arguments people have with themselves. I wish I could pick a favorite line, but to be honest, I can't. ^_^
    July 3rd, 2008 at 05:33pm
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