i dont care wat ppl say its adoring lol its great~!!!!
September 9th, 2009 at 06:10am
YAY!!!!! I love!! (and if you knew me you'd know that was saying something) Fabulous! It's filled with emotion and every word seems to fit into place. Only thing you may want to change
Yet again did you get to me
Yet again did I see myself cry
Yet again did I bleed
though I understand that you wanted the beginnings to fit together it doesn't exactly flow correctly. It is good as it is but if you simplified it a bit it might sound better. If you want an idea just ask and I'd be happy to help, but otherwise this is great.