A Vampire's Suicide - Comments

  • xoDeathPrincessxo

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    i can picture this happenin
    it has meaning
    it's great
    i love the use of words
    July 15th, 2008 at 12:03pm
  • katy.bowers

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    i think you did an amazing job writing this. i could see it happening! i think the last line in this poem is the best line. i loved it!
    July 14th, 2008 at 01:46am
  • miaiko

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    Thank you! ^^
    It means alot.
    July 9th, 2008 at 10:05pm
  • creatureofthedark

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    I could actually picture the scene with the vampire sitting on a hill and the sunrise coming up.
    Very well written.
    July 9th, 2008 at 06:46am
  • miaiko

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    Thank you so much! =D
    July 5th, 2008 at 07:42pm
  • kojiboo

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    I really love this poem, the last line is absolutely epic.
    Amazing job! =]
    July 5th, 2008 at 04:17am