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  • bored

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    lol it was good it reminds me of a story
    February 28th, 2008 at 10:08pm
  • Antagonist

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    Oh.

    No,it doesn't offend me or upset me.I thin I'll rewrite it and take your advise. :D
    April 19th, 2007 at 06:27pm
  • kafka.

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    i like the first -aww whats the word ? whats the word, i hate it when this happens - yeah thats it, the first stanza. and the last line, that ones just wonderful, but the rest plz dont be mad at me or something but they are just words, this must hurt your feeling or something, but i still hope it wont, but you just blah-blah-blah-ed. it was so pretty, like you were talking to your lover or something, and then you went the other way around and started writing some kind of emo song or something -no ofence- i dont mean to be mean, but i think you should like continue the lover talking thing, and make the i am not okay thing into an other poem, or something
    i hope this doesnt upset you, i really do
    April 18th, 2007 at 07:51pm
  • JessiKAT

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    Wow, excellent choice of words.
    Amazing!
    April 18th, 2007 at 05:04pm
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