Hey, Little Brother - Comments

  • Kismet

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    This is beautiful. I know this is going to sound really strange...or complimentary, but your poem totally just made me cry a little.
    June 30th, 2009 at 08:00am
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    Sageeee

    Love, love and more love.
    Guess what..
    I happened to totally love this poem too!

    Seriously, it was so sad,
    but it all came together in a way that made me smile

    Think i'm psycho yet
    Haha.

    Just Kidding, I'm just slightly loopy.
    Slightly :P
    January 1st, 2009 at 05:20am
  • PandaChan164

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    I love your poems! I'd like to write poetry too but I'm not too sure exactly how to write them, like the lines, where to separate and all :l I only know a little lol But awesome poem =)
    November 8th, 2008 at 10:44pm
  • iniahla

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    This is beautiful.
    November 8th, 2008 at 03:27am
  • Favole

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    omg! its so sad, i truly hope its not based on a personal experience.. its a great poem thou! verry well written, one of my favs.
    November 4th, 2008 at 12:25am
  • alaska.daisy

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    this is so touching. and i, too, hope it's not based on a personal experience.
    i loveee the way it's written : ]
    October 31st, 2008 at 02:27am
  • frivolity

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    that was so beautiful! this is the best poem i've read yet.
    it's so sad, yet lovely. this wasn't personal experience was it? i'm so sorry if it was!
    i can almost feel the strong bond between brother and sister. i wanted to cry after i finished reading this. you have an amazing gift of poetry.
    October 16th, 2008 at 03:01am
  • MoonShine

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    omg, I hope this isn't based on personal experience. I loved it! It's so full of emotion.
    September 22nd, 2008 at 05:15am
  • ni.Cole

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    Sage, you are an amazing writer , this poem left me speechless
    August 1st, 2008 at 07:53am
  • lkljnhijkj

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    wow. . . all i can say is wow. . . just. . . wow
    July 15th, 2008 at 06:22pm
  • XoXkXoX

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    oh my gosh...I really love this poem. wow.
    July 13th, 2008 at 12:49am
  • IxPulledxThexTrigger

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    holy shit.
    thats realy sad.
    but amazing. i love the way you put your words together. i love this.
    thats really sad though, are you okay?
    July 11th, 2008 at 11:32pm
  • creatureofthedark

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    Wow.
    That's so sad but written amazingly.
    I hope things work out for you. :)
    July 4th, 2008 at 10:29pm