Break It - Comments

I completely agree with everything A7Xmcs said. I loved it, a lot. Great work.

thanks guys
i've been playing around with this for awhile, and i wasn't completely happy with it, but i thought "what the hell" and so i posted it, not really sure...
but now i feel pretty good about it. =) thank you!

I really like this. It speaks to the heart and has good rhythm. I was singing it in my head when I was reading it. Especially the chorus. This is a great thing to come to your mind. I know I feel this way often...

this is really good! I like your rhym sceme. it sounds like it could be a song!