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  • homogeneous

    homogeneous (100)

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    I liked this but in my opinion I think you should have ended it wil that line "I have to hands, with them I can take my life." I liked this, though.
    July 8th, 2008 at 08:15pm
  • Miss.Understanding

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    that was sad....but good! nice poem =0)
    July 7th, 2008 at 02:49am
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