July 25th, 2008 at 09:50am
Why Linger - Comments
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I really liked this!!July 23rd, 2008 at 06:04pm
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Okay, you just impress me more and more with every poem I read.July 19th, 2008 at 09:12am
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nice alliteration!July 12th, 2008 at 02:59am
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I like the way it was put together and the way it flows.
Another great poem =DJuly 8th, 2008 at 09:25pm -
oh! wow! you're so talented!July 8th, 2008 at 07:57pm
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yes very nicely done. it flows well and it gives thy the feeling dat life brings. very good points n poem over all! *_^July 8th, 2008 at 05:09pm
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I'm glad you wrote this, it needs to be heard.
This also flows very nicely. The rhyming is very creative.July 8th, 2008 at 01:51pm
How did you get to write like this?