wow, that was...deep for lack of a better vocabulary. Most guys your age, let alone people that I know your age, are not that good at writing poetry. Very nice job, I love it!
The silver spilled from her mouth like a waterfall,
and then she laid down for her final rest.
It wasn't just forever but for eternity, or better yet until we meet again.
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Wow thats great. I feel the same way about someone...that was awesome. Do you have an account on www.poems-and-quotes.com? if you don't , you need to get one! XD
-mouth drops-
You're a guy, right? Sorry, I don't mean to be sexist at all and I know many great poets were and are male but not many guys your age would be so good!!!
Oh my word I actually someone who can write on this site! No offense to anyone. I might not have read your poetry, and it might be good. But yeah. Great!