The Dawn For Alice - Comments

I like the repetition of 'determined.'
And I'm assuming that this is for Before The Dawn with Alice and her girlfriend.
But it's really well written, the description in enough, the word choices are great without going overboard as people tend to do in poetry.
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Wow debbie.. this is amazing
Its so well written.. Proud of you!
My whole college class just sat here and llistened to me read this and were amazed when I told them your age.
They all wanted me to tell you how amazing it was (:

I love you

This might be the best poem I've ever read. It's so beautiful.

Beautiful.
It's so deep for me, because I actually know what this is about.
-sigh-
I'm not a great poetry fan, but this is fantastic.