Apology. - Comments

I like it a lot!
Found it on the pimpin' and reccin' thread.
I love how you can tell it's about drug use but you never come out and SAY that.
Really creative and interesting, good work :)

Well I like this and that rarely happens with me
its has good rhytmn, not common

all sh*te my *ss!
thats an awesome piece of poem!
and i couldnt agree more
maybe i just like it cus i feel i know far too many people who have gone to far, and cant leave, far too many.

Wow this is wonderful. I love it.
It reminds me a lot of the trioubled youth and peer pressure.
It's good, and so sad! :( I love it.

i think i know who this is about.. = [
I apologise too.

This is such an amazing piece of Poetry. x

This is the kind of poem that makes you think about yourself,
really think, and just see... 'why'.
I thought that it might be about your friend and his...mistake, i'll say, well i read the title and the date.
I think its good that you got your feelings out a bit by writing this
and having never been in that situation it made me understand
how you must be feeling more than i did before.

I can't do this amazing peice of work justice with this comment
but i have to say it really is enlightening, inspiring, superb.
The 2nd to last stanza was probably my favorite
because its rather simple but once you look deeper and ask yourself [i]does it matter?[/i] its a very powerful moment.

xxx