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XusernameneededX (100)

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this is really good
but sad

July 27th, 2008 at 09:24am

zillaidma (100)

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DAMN!!!! THIS SRE THINGS I WANT TO TELL [i]MY[/i] FATHER!!!!
I love this poem so I'll add it to my bucket of FAVORITE POEMS TO CHERRISH!!!!
You got skill, kimi. you got skill!!

July 20th, 2008 at 07:01am

Mattchew (100)

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... =[

July 19th, 2008 at 02:55pm

Color me Lily; (100)

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Awww.
Nobodys perfect, 1
and 2 your very pretty

July 19th, 2008 at 04:49am

Gurken (100)

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Read it.
Loved it.

July 17th, 2008 at 09:59am

xoulovemeox (100)

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awe baby - i love this poem-- i love u so much dont eer forget that--- u are pretty and i need u i would die without u -- and u are not a waste of space-- and noone is ever perfect-everyone has flaws even if they do seem perfect--those ppl piss me off--haha okay ttyl

July 17th, 2008 at 03:24am

Cryptic Ink (100)

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This is so
very
depressing...
but a good poem no less.
I think you did a good job expressing anger with your choice of words

July 16th, 2008 at 03:24am

iMaggie (400)

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This is so sad.
But good.
*curls up in ball*

July 16th, 2008 at 03:01am