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Heartstrings. (100)

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I like how you repeat the notion and the analogy of a toy.
Its very raw.
And its overwhelming because it cuts right there.
I think expanded, this poem would be a real gem.

July 28th, 2008 at 02:01pm
eeeee (100)

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Whoa, deep.

July 18th, 2008 at 09:31am

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