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  • Heartstrings.

    Heartstrings. (100)

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    I like how you repeat the notion and the analogy of a toy.
    Its very raw.
    And its overwhelming because it cuts right there.
    I think expanded, this poem would be a real gem.
    July 28th, 2008 at 02:01pm
  • eeeee

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    Whoa, deep.
    July 18th, 2008 at 09:31am
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