WOW!!!!
MOST AWESOMEST POEM EVER!!!!
it shall be added to my bucket of FAVORITE POEMS TO CHERRISH!!!!!!
i especially like the metaphor you used : "Stop acting like the sun". I love it!!!!!
Its so perfect to describe of being the center of attention without actually saying it directly!!! Great metaphor!!! And i love thatthird stanza!!! the whole poem is so pure and full of great awsome-ness!!!
Fabualous poet your going to be!!!!! ^u^
MOST AWESOMEST POEM EVER!!!!
it shall be added to my bucket of FAVORITE POEMS TO CHERRISH!!!!!!
i especially like the metaphor you used : "Stop acting like the sun". I love it!!!!!
Its so perfect to describe of being the center of attention without actually saying it directly!!! Great metaphor!!! And i love thatthird stanza!!! the whole poem is so pure and full of great awsome-ness!!!
Fabualous poet your going to be!!!!! ^u^