Awwww...
This reminds me a heap of one of my friends.
How we're still the best of friends even though both of us have changed a heap.
I really like it.
Very good.
xx
your descriptions are so vivid. they give your poem a lovely texture... but you need more flavor! poems are like food. :) put serious emotions into your poems. submerge your reader in your feelings!!
This reminds me a heap of one of my friends.
How we're still the best of friends even though both of us have changed a heap.
I really like it.
Very good.
xx