umm guys, i just typed that up while I was playing Gears of War online one night at my grandmas. I wasn't trying to write a masterpice or anything i just wanted to say how i felt.
August 22nd, 2008 at 10:44pm
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Naw, I think LunaMoon is wrong, you Can rhyme only some of the time. I love this poem, it's so to the point it makes my heart happy. You are a better writer than you told me.August 22nd, 2008 at 08:38pm
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Cute. I like how free it is. One thing, though: You can't just rhyme only some of the time. You either keep the same pattern and rhyme through the whole poem or just don't rhyme at all (well, I guess if you rhyme once accidentally it won't matter.) :]August 22nd, 2008 at 06:23am
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you made me laugh :) yay!July 29th, 2008 at 04:32am
