Something Dies - Comments

The imaginery was great in this poem, and I liked the use of picture.

I'd really like to read something by you, though, that is...colorful? Do you get what I'm saying? I mean...like totally out there. Happy, bright, gorgeous, not cliche. I think you could do it well. It's just a suggestion.

I love your poems! I just realized that I keep saying in all of my comments that I like the flow of it, but it's true! there are so many poems on here that just don't flow right, but your writing always seems so natural and honest and... flowing.

really like it very deep
and love the pic to it gose very well with the poem
LOVED IT