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  • innocent wolves

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    It had great rythm and flow, that's not always easy to manage with a length like that.
    I loved the bottom lines! You always end your poems so darn freaking good *lol*
    April 30th, 2007 at 01:41pm
  • RIOT!

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    this is great.. it had great flow, and it describes a feeling that almost everyone has at some point.
    uhm.. yeah, just wow...
    it kinda felt nice reading it, because right now it felt like it's something i would have written...
    wicked job.
    *huggles*
    April 27th, 2007 at 04:42pm
  • Catastrophic Dreams

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    Love it very deep
    April 27th, 2007 at 12:52pm
  • horsie890

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    *gawk*
    Did you write this based on that journal entry I wrote? Because it describes how I feel perfectly.
    April 27th, 2007 at 07:29am